Did not enjoy it, at all. That said, I would like to enjoy it. An adult action game where the sex is an intended action rather than a result of failure would be great. For a prototype, it's hard to really explore or engage with it since it's so poorly balanced. The hit boxes seem to be a mess, as an example. Obviously, as a prototype, balance isn't a priority since you're just communicating an idea, but on the other hand there has to be some room for messing around with it, and this left nothing to work with.

The thumbnail shows up, but not the actual piece.

I'm looking forward to reading on what the difference is between "Human" and "True Human." I'm certain the wording is intentional. It's looking like an interesting setting.

I wish there was a way to differentiate types of "adult" ratings. If you think you'll be doing more gore stuff, maybe put "guro" like a tag at the start in the same way you do with "commission?" Though maybe that's pointless since the whole thing was viewable from the thumbnail.

Edited to add: Apologies if it sounded like an accusation. I'm not saying the inability to somehow mark this as different from something that's just sexual is your fault. I did not mean to imply that you didn't follow posting guidelines or anything like that.

As for gore in the gallery, I think people would consider this different than the work you've done that has a zombie character or something similar. I don't know if reactions to those pieces were similar to this one. If they were the same, then I'm wrong. But if this one is getting a more negative response than those, then I think that would say this kind of gore is viewed differently.

Anyway, I could've articulated that more clearly when I first wrote this. If it means anything, I rated it in the middle since I greatly dislike the content, but I think you're a really great illustrator.